1.Using your notes from your reading, summarize what is happening in your story using 2 examples from your book. Include at least2. one connection and3. one inference that you made while reading. Keep in mind the previous feedback that you've received so that you don't make the same errors.
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In my book Maximum Ride: Saving The World And Other Extreme Sports the whole flock minus Max and Fang are held against their will and they will not concede defeat. Meanwhile, Max and Fang are visiting two of Max old friends from the previous book Maximum Ride: The Angel Experiment. Dr.Martinez, and her daughter help Max remove a micro-chip Max has embedded in her arm. "Someone took my other hand. Fang. I felt his luses, his bones, his strength" is one quote that shows the fear of Max during the operation to remove her micro-chip which is that she fells alone and afraid to be put under the needle and that she might lose the use of her arm, so when Fang takes her hand she starts to feel confident and not alone. Back to the other flock member and yes their talking flying dog Todo as well. "When we get out of this everyone of those robots is have fang marks on them" is the comment that Todo adds in to create a secret conversation between him and the other flock members so that the Robo-Erasers can't hear them. That quote shows the emotion of of Todo which is anger, and confidence himself even though he is not even half the size of the Robo-Erasers.
I have one big connection with the conflict of being held against my will which is that I have seen movies, and real life things that involve being held against peoples will to get a money ransom. I have another connection with this story which is that I know how it feels to see an old friend and having them do something sorta unusual. One of my inferences is that the flock, and Todo will be held against their will Intel Max and Fang free them. My other inference is that my author (James Patterson) is going to have Max come out of the operation with both fully functioning arms. So basically that's whats happening in my story so far.
Bryan,
ReplyDeleteGreat job! You really did summarize what the story was about and I like how you made your connections. What page did your examples come from??
Grade: 7 P - You have showed a good understanding of the assignment and expectations and were aware of the choices you made in your work using substantial details, development and support. The assignment reflected imagination and worldly awareness as well as literary features used in context and with intention and understanding.