Week 3 11.22.10 - 11.26.10

1.Using your notes from your reading, summarize what is happening in your story using 2 examples from your book. Include at least2. one connection and3. one inference that you made while reading. Keep in mind the previous feedback that you've received so that you don't make the same errors.

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In my book Maximum Ride: Saving The World And Other Extreme Sports  the whole flock minus Max and Fang are held against their will and they will not concede defeat. Meanwhile, Max and Fang are visiting two of Max old friends from the previous book Maximum Ride: The Angel Experiment. Dr.Martinez, and her daughter help Max remove a micro-chip Max has embedded in her arm. "Someone took my other hand. Fang. I felt his luses, his bones, his strength" is one quote that shows the fear of Max during the operation to remove her micro-chip which is that she fells alone and afraid to be put under the needle and that she might lose the use of her arm, so when Fang takes her hand she starts to feel confident and not alone. Back to the other flock member and yes their talking flying dog Todo as well. "When we get out of this everyone of those robots is have fang marks on them" is the comment that Todo adds in to create a secret conversation between him and the other flock members so that the Robo-Erasers can't hear them. That quote shows the emotion of of Todo which is anger, and confidence himself even though he is not even half the size of the Robo-Erasers.

I have one big connection with the conflict of being held against my will which is that I have seen movies, and real life things that involve being held against peoples will to get a money ransom. I have another connection with this story which is that I know how it feels to see an old friend and having them do something sorta unusual. One of my inferences is that the flock, and Todo will be held against their will Intel Max and Fang free them. My other inference is that my author (James Patterson) is going to have Max come out of the operation with both fully functioning arms. So basically that's whats happening in my story so far.

Fixed responce to Tristan's question

Bryan, I think this is a good response the only thing that it needs is a little more details please other than that its awesome. What can you use to analyze your character better?. 

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I can use my character chart to analyze my character by their looks, thoughts, and personality. I can also analyze my character by maybe using my notes on them better than I am now. I can check  back in my book a lot more than I am right now. Going back to my book would include a close eye to find every single detail about the character I wish to analyze. If someone asks me to mention two things about Max (my main character), I would go back to my book and probably quote "I want to be a cheerleader, Nudge said wistfully. Oh, for God sake,". Which would show that Max doesn't like to have her mind up in the clouds, she prefers to be focused and aware of her surroundings. That quote also means that she is very mother-like when she is around her younger siblings, which makes her a very loving but yet uncaring in the same way.

Responce to Tristan's question

Well I could now use the charater chart to help with that so that I can analyze my character better. I could also use my notes more to analyze them better.