Bryan, I think this is a good response the only thing that it needs is a little more details please other than that its awesome. What can you use to analyze your character better?.
I can use my character chart to analyze my character by their looks, thoughts, and personality. I can also analyze my character by maybe using my notes on them better than I am now. I can check back in my book a lot more than I am right now. Going back to my book would include a close eye to find every single detail about the character I wish to analyze. If someone asks me to mention two things about Max (my main character), I would go back to my book and probably quote "I want to be a cheerleader, Nudge said wistfully. Oh, for God sake,". Which would show that Max doesn't like to have her mind up in the clouds, she prefers to be focused and aware of her surroundings. That quote also means that she is very mother-like when she is around her younger siblings, which makes her a very loving but yet uncaring in the same way.
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