It is important for readers to understand what is happening in their books, who the characters are and what the theme is. In your response, outline the following: Plot, Setting, Characters, and Universal Theme. Provide evidence to support your thinking from your book.
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In my book Maximum Ride: Saving The World And Other Extreme Sports, by James Patterson the plot so far is the flock having a anxious urge wanting to know what happened to the Erasers and all the genetic creations of people/anmials. Soon they find out that the Whitecoats (the evil men running the School or the labs) are slowly finding the creations and killing them. So far I believe that the Universal Theme is "Never give up and you will accomplish your goals". The setting now on pg #40 where Fang and Max (two main members of the flock)flying and scoping out the area for good land to build a new life off of, while Nudge, Iggy, Gazzy, Angel, and Total (Angel's talking dog from the labs). They are doing this, because the flock excluding Max agreed to make a new living and forget about saving the world.
Bryan - did you reread this aloud? Really? Your Plot isn't to bad. You could definetly do better with setting and character - check your notes. More text support would help.
ReplyDeleteYour universal them is awesome - but how do you know that is what it is? Text support and background knowledge would help me!
3 PP- You showed a limited understanding of the assignment and expectations as well as some awareness of your choices in your work. The assignment showed some imagination but the details and development need work.
Brayan,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a good response the only thing that it needs is a little more details please other than that its awesome. What can you use to analyze your character better?.