Friday, September 17, 2010
Week 4 responce
My book Maximum Ride: The Angel Experiment's author James Patterson, his place in the book on the way Max looks is important because of her wings witch are white with golden striped natural highlights. Her wings are the most fantastic wings of the whole flock. Fang's look is kinda over expressed by his attidute toward Max. His attidute is a tough guy gothic kinda thing. I know that all this is important because like without a mental view apon your characters in your book,you would believe that the gender, look, way of dress of the character is different then the author intended.
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Bryan thank you for remembering how to show the title and author of your book. But, where you paying attention to my Demo regarding the parts to include in a Blog??? Please go to the class website and find the Blog checklist I created Friday - use it. It is on the page with blog questions - and which question are you trying to answer???
ReplyDeleteYOu try to give a quote, I think, about what Max's wings look like. But why is it important to know that hers are the most fantastic? Is she the queen? What does "tough guy gothic kinda thing" look like? Why is this important to know? I understand that we need the mental image in our head, but is there a more important reason for using a characters looks to describe their role/personality/characteristics? Think of what you know about the world around you. How could use outside connections to help explain how important this way of showing expression is important to Patterson?
3-4 PP- You showed a limited understanding of the assignment and expectations as well as some awareness of your choices in your work. The assignment showed some imagination but the details and development need work.